Currently Listening Hero By Kirk Franklin Sunshine see related

i love that cd. anyway.........

since i got such great but probably bias feedback i decided to post another poem. like i said before i got plenty more just one at a time. now this one is free verse so let me know what u think.

i love the rain and thunderstorms

the warm wet drops

on my face

the thunder and lightning

they inspire me

its like

the sky feels me

it cry's out for me

washing away

my worries and cares

sitting on my steps

the water hits my feet

every drop has a rhythm

has a beat

it plays to my heart

when i'm all alone

then when its washed away

my sorrows and pain

the sun comes out

and they

the sun and rain

come together

 to make

a lovely rain bow

if u like the poems boost one or two that u like to some of ur other friends. Especially u Ricardo. (as long as ur subscriptions list is)either way just let me know how u feel.

     VeenaRaks...... love.......... late.

Currently Listening Hero By Kirk Franklin Hero see related

One of the many talents God has blessed me with just so happen to be poetry, but not many people have ever heard some of my work. I need soome help. Please read my poem and tell me what you have to say. If you like it please boost it is I can get advice from others. thanx.

loves promise should have no peak

should have no climax

to then become weak

not just about sex

or if your vexed

or if i can be a freak

love the me within my body

and not the body itself

dont just like the body part within

that in other ways makes us melt

but melt with me

become one with me

in more ways than this world can fathem

become one with me spiritualy

in more ways than this world can imagine

our love should love eternally

through thick and through thin

our love should have no boundries

our love should have no end

                                                                                  -VeenaRaks

I got more in my poetry closet but.......one at a time.

Currently Listening Hero By Kirk Franklin Keep Your Head see related

Since no one really replied to this one last time, im gonna repost it. I really want to hear what you have to say.

"Readin 1 of Ricky's entries has got me thinking about crushes lately. I haven't really been intrested in someone in a while but the only someone who I would even consider.....lets just say, not only is it the worst timing but a 1 out of a billionth chance of happening in this century. anyway, I got this really cool Q from Kathrine Li on my myspace and wanted to post it here too.

           IF YOU HAD ME ALONE... LOCKED UP IN YOUR ROOM FOR TWENTY-FOUR HOURS & I HAD TO DO WHAT EVER YOU WANTED ME TO, WHAT WOULD YOU DO WITH ME?

This does not nessisarily have to be answered in a sexual or flirty way. You can answer it any way you like. Even if you had me as your cleaning slave, just answer. Im up for anthing. "

After about a year of being on Xanga Im finally getting the hang of this thing. After work ended this summer got pretty boring.So Ifoundd plenty of time to clean redecorate and all this other crazy stuff and fit in some time to redu my Xanga site So come check it out.

I feel so lonely.........Not really .......just bored.  

I Also found this new thing called a Zwinky.Its  really cute Version of Zanga. Every One who reads this need to try it out and pas it on. Heres mine.........

http://profile.zwinky.com/zwinkyprofile/main.jhtml?username=raksluvr

They are really fun so go visit and make your own Zwinky. You Can even use them on other sites.

Enough advertisement.Since I havent entered a web log in a long time i'm gonna do a summer recap.

First, my best friend went out with the guy that i had liked for 2 years. (and she knew) eventually i let her because what can i do.........he likes her back so they went out for about a month and did their lovey-dovey crap (at my house    so they wouldn't get in trouble and that was the only way she could visit him since he lived on my block.) ANYWAY! Thats overnow and it's all back to normal.

 Next was my summer job. The coolest thing was that it was the easiest job ever made except playing video games, maybe...........but all i had to do was sing for 4 hours a day (no weekends) and collect about $400 at the end. Not only was it Only For the month of july only but some of my best friends were there to. GIVE A SHOUT OUT TO CHELSEA, RICARDO, JASMINE, AND A FEW CLOSE 8TH....NOW 9TH GRADERS. It was funny. I met some new peole. Like i told them.........some quiet, some idiots, but all around funny and i was happy to meet all of them. I was especially happy to meet this girl name Chabrell who can hit this really cool high note and be one of the best friends you could have.........and this hot boy named Gerald. don't let the name fool you he is so fine. Im eventually gonna get a pic of him on here but thats later.

Now I guess im looking forward to seeing some of my old school buddies and movin on with my life............Late.

 Readin 1 of Ricky's entries has got me thinking about crushes lately. I haven't really been intrested in someone in a while but the only someone who I would even consider.....lets just say, not only is it the worst timing but a 1 out of a billionth chance of happening in this century. anyway, I got this really cool Q from Kathrine Li on my myspace and wanted to post it here too.

           IF YOU HAD ME ALONE... LOCKED UP IN YOUR ROOM FOR TWENTY-FOUR HOURS & I HAD TO DO WHAT EVER YOU WANTED ME TO, WHAT WOULD YOU DO WITH ME?

This does not nessisarily have to be answered in a sexual or flirty way. You can can answer it any way you like. Even if you had me as your cleaning slave, just answer. Im up for anthing.